Wednesday, July 15, 2009

New Review for Broken Hero

I am very grateful to Tammy for her extremely wonderful review of my WWII romance, Broken Hero! yay!
"From the first pages I was drawn into England during World War II; Ms. Whitfield does an exemplary job of describing the country and the people. The dialogue is relaxed and believable, and it is easy to see both Audrey and Jake longing for each other, yet unable to give freely of themselves. I loved that there were no easy answers for this couple; the tension created between them is palpable and gut wrenching."
blurb:
Audrey Pearson's life changed dramatically when WWII broke out and her large home, Twelve Pines on the East Yorkshire coast, became a convalescence home for wounded soldiers. Her life is no longer lavish with entertainment, beautiful clothes and surrounded by a loving family. Soldiers, physically and mentally wounded now fill her home. The smell of disinfectant replaces her mother's perfume and gone are the friends and acquaintances - instead nurses roam the hallways.
Captain Jake Harding, a doctor training in psychiatry arrives at Twelve Pines. Audrey immediately finds herself attracted to the Captain, but he is remote towards her. Puzzled by his cold behaviour, Audrey tries to learn more about the handsome Captain. He reveals that he's lost a wife and baby in childbirth and refuses to ever remarry. However, despite this, Audrey believes she can change his mind and make him aware he doesn't have to spend his life alone. The ice around Jake's heart begins to melt. For years he has rejected the possibility of finding love again because of the pain it caused him before, but the beautiful Audrey shows him her love and she needs someone to love her in return. Could he honestly walk away from her, from the love that could be his?
From Amazon USA

Elizabeth Chadwick's books.


I've enjoyed reading some great books in recent weeks. Two are written by Elizabeth Chadwick, The Time Of The Singing and Shields Of Pride. Both very well written with detailed plots and an excellent sense of the medieval period and superbly researched.
Time of The Singing blurb:
When Roger Bigod, heir to the powerful earldom of Norfolk, arrives at court in 1177 to settle a bitter inheritance dispute with his half-brothers, he encounters Ida de Tosney, young mistress to King Henry II. A victim of Henry's seduction and the mother of his son, Ida is attracted to Roger and sees in him a chance of lasting security beyond the fickle dazzle of her current life. But her decision to marry Roger carries an agonising price. Roger's importance as a mainstay of the Angevin government puts an increasing strain on their marriage. Ida is deeply unhappy with the life she must live in his absence and grieves for her losses. Against a volatile political background, the gulf between Ida and Roger threatens to widen beyond crossing, especially when so many bridges have already been burned.

Shields Of Pride blurb:
The year is 1173. King Henry's efforts to crush his rebellious sons ignite bloody border skirmishes throughout the land. Yet it is a time of triumph for mercenary Josceline de Gael, bastard son of the king's most trusted ally. Victorious on the battlefield, de Gael suffers sweet defeat when his heart is conquered by the lovely Linnet de Montsorrel. But their love will find its greatest challenge as the torments of jealousy, suspicion, pride - and an enemy from beyond the grave - threaten all they hold dear.
Do yourself a favour and try some of Elizabeth Chadwick's books, which are all based on true people of medieval times. You won't be sorry!



Friday, July 03, 2009

Large Print Woodland Daughter


My historical family saga, Woodland Daughter, has been released in large print in the UK and I've just seen the cover for it. I've put it on here but it's not very clear for some reason, sigh.
blurb:
Throughout her years of devoted service to the Bradburys, Eden Harris has hidden a secret that would affect them all, a secret shared only with her husband, Nathan, and her grandfather. But an enemy returns, shattering her world and exposing her secret. Then, robbed of Nathan, she must flee from the country estate. However, her attempt to start anew is not so simple as the past haunts her. Now Eden must gather her strength and look into her heart to accept what the future offers.

Woodland Daughter can be bought in hardback here with free worldwide delivery, or in this large print version here.

Thursday, July 02, 2009

Meme?

Okay, my dear friend Anita Davison has tagged me to do the seven deadly sins thing - you're supposed to lie in one of them? I'm not sure how it works but I'll give it a go.

Pride:
Well, I suppose like all mothers I'm proud of my children. Is that boring? Probably. But that's the truth. Jack, Josh and Eleanor are three beautiful, generous, trustworthy and smart kids. I'm very proud to be their Mum and I think my hubby and I have done a good job with them so far. I'm trying to turn my young men out to be some woman's hero, and I aim that Ellie has the strength of personality to pick her own hero that never lets her down, or he'll have me to answer to!
I'm also have pride in my work, my writing is an extension of who I am and if other people enjoy my books then that fills me with pride.

Envy: I don't envy anyone, expect those who can eat anything they want and don't put on an ounce of weight, or those who never have bad hair days, or those who can resist chocolate. I'll stop now.

Gluttony: Chocolate. Enough said.

Lust: Richard Armitage, Gerald Butler, Russell Crowe. Say, being stranded on a desert island with them - one at a time, of course, as I must give each of them the individual attention they deserve.

Anger: I get ticked off at inconsiderate people. And those who think it's okay to be selfish.

Greed: Chocolate. Enough already!

Sloth: I hate, HATE cleaning shower cubicles. I'd rather clean a dozen toilets than one shower. Ironing - to survive it I must have a good movie on the dvd player. Dusting is a tedious chore that I try to ignore until one of the kids writes their name in it. Really, as teenagers you'd think they'd be over that stunt.

Okay I'm done. rather pathetic isn't it? LOL
Anita will be ashamed.
Woodland Daughter, my historical family saga novel has been released in large print in the UK.
I haven't received a copy of the new cover yet but you can purchase the book in large print from the publisher. http://www.ulverscroft.com/title.php?sqlCmd=isbn%3D9781847827487

Woodland Daughter in hardback is available here. http://www.bookdepository.co.uk/book/9780709086079/Woodland-Daughter

Other news is that my literary agency closed its doors at the end of June. So now I am officially without an agent and must begin searching for a new one. Wish me luck. I think I will need it. The words 'needle and haystack' come to mind.

I'm pleased that the first draft of my current family saga is finished. I'll take a short break from it before I start the next edit.

Final edits of my rom com, Hooked On You, have arrived. I'm looking forward to having that book wrapped up and published. I'm still waiting on the release date.

I'm all set to watch the Ashes and the Tour de France this month. I see some many late nights ahead.

I'm also looking forward to seeing the new Ice Age and the latest Harry Potter movies. if you like romantic comedies, go see The Proposal, it a nice movie and Ryan Renoylds is lovely eye candy!

Thursday, June 18, 2009

Getting it down.

Despite a head cold which is annoying the crap out of me, I've been managing to keep writing when not at work, which is mainly weekends when I don't write anyway because the house being full of people - oh right, they're my family, that's it, I keep forgetting.
Anyway, I'm writing the current family drama saga story, just another 30k or so to go and the first draft is finished. Yay! I love it when a book will just sings to me. I feel such a sense of achievement when the first draft is done, as the bulk of the work is over and I can then spend time polishing and editing and adding flesh to the bones.
Researching, as always, has been popping into the flow at times, but thankfully I don't mind researching and learning new things. When I'm feeling better I'll post some links to the research I've been reading.
Until then, I'll post this excerpt of one of my early novels, Kitty McKenzie.

Kitty McKenzie Blurb:
1864 - Suddenly left as the head of the family, Kitty McKenzie must find her inner strength to keep her family together against the odds. Evicted from their resplendent home in the fashionable part of York after her parents’ deaths, Kitty must fight the legacy of bankruptcy and homelessness to secure a home for her and her siblings. Through sheer willpower and determination she grabs opportunities with both hands from working on a clothes and rag stall in the market to creating a teashop for the wealthy. Her road to happiness is fraught with obstacles of hardship and despair, but she refuses to let her dream of a better life for her family die. She soon learns that love and loyalty brings its own reward.
Excerpt
“Kitty. Kitty!” Mary’s urgent whispering had Kitty rushing to her side and they both stared as an enormous carriage, pulled by four, proud, black horses, halted outside the shop windows. The frantic murmurings behind hands at the other tables held Kitty’s attention for a moment, but it was soon diverted back to the front entrance. A small, plump, elderly lady, dressed in a coffee-colored gown of silk with a large hat decorated in red feathers, walked in. Her hair was light gray and beautifully arranged under her hat, but it was her eyes that drew Kitty’s attention for they were the most brilliant blue.
“Would you care to be seated, madam?” Kitty nearly curtsied such was the woman’s regal manner.
The older woman ignored her for a moment while she took a good look around the premises. Some of the other ladies seated nodded their heads in acknowledgment, but no one spoke.
“I do believe these rooms look quite adequate,” declared the grand lady, “and you, miss, what is your name?” She turned an inquisitive gaze to Kitty.
“Miss Katherine McKenzie, madam.”
“And these tearooms are yours, no doubt?”
“Indeed they are, madam.” Kitty nodded, wishing with all her heart she had gone with Ben to Australia. She didn’t know how long she could cope with such scrutiny.
“I do confess this table here will do nicely, yes?” She looked at Kitty for confirmation.
Kitty stepped forward and pulled out a chair for her. “If madam wishes it.”
The proud little woman sat at the table by the window. She then turned to the two ladies sitting behind her. “Mrs. Pollock, and you, Mrs. Seymour, is this establishment to your liking?”
Kitty closed her eyes and held her breath.
The two ladies, surprised by the question, hesitated. “Well, yes, Mrs. Cannon. We find it most agreeable,” they parroted each other.
The old woman nodded, turning back to Kitty and Mary, who hung a little behind. “Miss McKenzie, I’m Mrs. Dorothea Cannon, of Cannonvale Park. How do you do?”
“Very well, thank you, Mrs. Cannon, and you?” Kitty forced a smile.
“Fine enough at the minute, though I shall die of thirst any moment.” She frowned, but Kitty saw a twinkle in her eye and managed to grin back.
“Would a pot of tea be to your liking or maybe coffee perhaps?”
“Coffee, I think. Make certain it is fresh and of good quality.” Mrs. Cannon waved a hand towards the display counter. “An array of those dainty little cakes too, if you please.”
“Of course, madam.” Kitty walked away with Mary at her heels. Going into the backroom, Kitty nearly collided with Connie and Alice who stood listening in the doorway.
“Who’s she?” Connie whispered.
“A Mrs. Cannon, now help me make some fresh coffee.” Kitty rushed into the larder. “Mary, go out front and fill a small stand for Mrs. Cannon.”
For half an hour Mrs. Cannon drank her coffee and nibbled at the cakes Mary placed before her. It was not until the other ladies seated behind her rose, paid for their tea and left that Mrs. Cannon beckoned Kitty over to her. “Sit down, girl,” she demanded airily, with a wave of her jeweled hand to the opposite chair.
Kitty sat, not at all sure what was required of her.
“Now, let me tell you something. I came here today to have a good look at you and this establishment because of one thing,” Mrs. Cannon paused, eyeing Kitty warily, “my grandson.”
“Your grandson?”
“Indeed. You see he told me he had fallen for a young woman who was beautiful, intelligent and most of all, worthy.” Here, Mrs. Cannon paused again and peered closely at Kitty. “So I thought I must meet this young woman to satisfy myself whether she deserves my grandson’s affections.”
Kitty felt the blood leave her face. Oh, Lord. She really couldn’t face another confrontation with a member of Ben’s family. “You are Benjamin’s grandmother?”
Dorothea Cannon’s lips twitched. “Indeed, and I like surprising people.”
“You have certainly done that today, Mrs. Cannon.”
“Let me tell you of the sensations that have come about since you appeared on the scene. My daughter has plagued me night and day over you. She has recited every detail of your two brief encounters, and let me assure you, Miss McKenzie, my daughter is a woman whom you wouldn’t wish to have as a foe.”
Kitty closed her eyes momentarily. “Please believe me, Mrs. Cannon, I would be most happy to befriend Ben’s mother, but alas, she will not see beyond my current status as a shop owner.”
“Do you believe you are worthy of my grandson’s affections?”
“Whether I’m worthy or not is something I cannot answer. However, I do know I love your grandson most desperately and with all my heart.” Out of her pocket, she pulled Ben’s letter and handed it over for Dorothea to read. Maybe then she would see the love they felt for each other.
Kitty waited while the other woman read the letter.
“Excellent. That is the first hurdle over with. It is obvious the depth of feeling between the two of you.” Dorothea returned the letter and smiled. “Benjamin visited me before he sailed and I was delighted at the change in him. I do accept my daughter has been at fault for Benjamin’s unhappiness. She is far too controlling for her own good and I’m afraid it has all been for nothing. Ever since Benjamin was a child, all he wanted to do is be away from her and her complete devotion for him. Which in turn, distresses my daughter and makes her more determined to be closer to him.”
Dorothea sipped her coffee, staring thoughtfully out the window at the passing traffic. “I’m ashamed that my daughter is a woman whom one can not easily befriend. She was thoroughly spoiled by my late husband and I’m afraid John does not stand up to her as much as he should.”
“I found Mr. Kingsley most agreeable. I liked him a lot.”
“Yes, dear John, he is a good man. Oh, do not have me mistaken, Miss McKenzie, I love my daughter most dearly and I love her more the less I see of her.” Dorothea chuckled at her own joke and Kitty hid a smile with her hand.
Dorothea suddenly rose from her chair and Kitty did also. “I must be on my way now, my dear. I would like to call again, if I may?”
“Oh, yes, please do, Mrs. Cannon.”
“Call me Dorothea, my dear, and I believe you are known as Kitty?”
“Yes, I am, and thank you, Dorothea. It has been such a pleasure to meet you.” Kitty held out her hand and Dorothea took it.
Together they went outside to the carriage. As Dorothea was handed up the carriage step, she paused and turned back to Kitty. “I shall tell all my friends and acquaintances about your lovely tearooms, my dear, be assured of that. We must keep it in the family, you know.” Dorothea winked at Kitty, before resting back against the leather bound seats. With a flick of the reins, the carriage rolled away.

For more information on Kitty and her story, go to my website;
http://www.annewhitfield.com/kittymckenzieexcerpt.html

Friday, June 12, 2009

Special Guest Blogger: Janis Susan May!

Can you tell me a little about yourself?
My dear Anne, there is very little about me that is little! I’ve been a queen-sized woman (or, as I put it, a grown-up sized woman) all my life and have, my friends tell me, lived a larger-than-life life!
Personally, I think I’m rather dull. I love to cook and read and my favourite pick-me-up is a quick loll in the backyard hot tub, which was one of our wedding presents. I’m a seventh generation Texan – my family came here in the last gasps of the 1700s, when this area was a howling wilderness. I began work in our family’s advertising agency when I was nine, as a stripper. (Try telling people that you began work as a stripper when you were nine years old – it will stop a cocktail party dead in its tracks!) Actually, like most things it sounds a great deal more interesting than it actually was; all I did was take old layouts and strip off the bits we could use again – headlines, logos, sketch art, etc.
Later, in my young adult years, I sang opera and acted just about anywhere they’d have me, then after an illness cut short my singing career, I worked for a talent agency and started to write. Unfortunately, I bore easily, so I changed jobs with alarming frequency. The job with the talent agency lasted ten years, a record that nothing else has come close to equalling. I’ve worked for a travel agency, been editor in chief of two multi-magazine publishing groups, Supervisor of Accessioning for a bio-genetic DNA testing lab, a Spanish language income tax preparer… there’s more, but I don’t remember them at the moment.
I’ve travelled over a fair chunk of the world and lived in Mexico off and on for years, though now The Husband and I live in the house in which I grew up. And a very unusual house it is, too – my late mother’s dream home, every stick and brick designed by her, with no front door and no hallways. When my husband and I moved in, we added a second library. At the moment, we’re having designs drawn up for a third.
At one time during my wandering years I was engaged to three different men, who lived on three different continents, all at the same time. It was fun while it lasted!
All my life I’ve been fascinated with Ancient Egypt, and as an adult got very involved (and still am!) with the American Research Center in Egypt, a scholarly organization that probably encompasses most of the working Egyptologists in the world. In 2005 I was honoured to be the closing speaker at their International Conference. The North Texas Chapter, one of the most respected and active chapters, was founded in my den. I began and for nine years edited and published the NT/ARCE NEWSLETTER, which is archived as a scholarly resource by museums and institutions of higher learning all over the world. During the nine years of my tenure our NEWSLETTER was the only monthly publication for ARCE in the world. Still may be, for all I know!
The important thing about ARCE is that I met the man who was to become my husband at one of the meetings. He’s very handsome, several years younger than I, a Captain in the Navy Reserve (with two deployments to Iraq so far, the last one as Preventive Medicine Officer for the US Forces in Iraq), a sharpshooter and a Level One High Power Rocketeer. He also reads hieroglyphs. He proposed in the moonlit gardens of the Mena Hotel in Giza, just across the road from the Pyramids and six months later I became a first time bride at the age of 54. We count the length of our marriage in months and days – currently 98 months and a few days.
The only shadow on our happiness is that three weeks after our wedding my mother died suddenly. It had been just Mother and me for over 20 years, so the loss was devastating. My husband helped keep me sane – well, as sane as I’ve ever been. He doesn’t like me to work outside the home, so now I am a simple housewife whose main job is to spoil her husband, look after our varying menagerie of rescued cats and dogs and write books on the side. He’s very proud of my writing, and I call him my personal patron of the arts.
A page and a half! Goodness – but I did warn you that I don’t do anything little!

You were one of the founding members of Romance Writers America, what was that time like and what is your perspective of RWA now?
At the risk of sounding like a stereotypical, crotchety old woman, you kids today have no idea what it was like before RWA and the Internet, how alone and isolated we writers were. I sold my first novel (to Dell, a Candlelight Intrigue) in 1979, more by the grace of God and sheer good luck than by any contacts or skill. When I sold my first novel – and my second, for that matter – I had never even met another romance writer. In fact, I had only met one novelist at all, a much lauded and honoured mainstream novelist, an older man whose name you would definitely recognize. The only reason I knew him is that we shared a typewriter repairman and ran into each other two, maybe three times in the shop. He was a very nice and gracious man, but other than our repairman and the weather, we had nothing to talk about.
Then one day in the summer of 1980 my editor called me and asked if I would be interested in going to a meeting to see if an organization of professional romance writers might be feasible. I said sure, and when the meeting finally happened in December of that year, I was there in Houston.
I don’t know how to express what an experience that first meeting was. It was the first time that almost all of us had ever even been in the same room with other romance writers. The electricity was unbelievable. There were forty or fifty of us and I don’t think any of us ever shut our mouths that entire weekend. We talked about craft. We talked about business. We talked about blending family and work and writing. We talked about contracts and sell-throughs. We talked about every aspect of the writing business. The air itself seemed to shimmer with excitement. I couldn’t wait to get involved.
Then in January, just a few weeks later, my father passed away and I was swamped with grief, a devastated mother and a family business to keep afloat. For a few months RWA (and most everything else) was far from my mind and when I could get back into it, it was a totally different organization from that we had envisioned.
We made a mistake in not setting up RWA to have a tiered membership, with only published writers having full voting privileges. Every one of us who came to the organizational meeting was published, save for maybe two or three who were pre-published, in the correct usage of a now bastardized and much abused word – i.e., they were in the limbo between signing a contract and the book being released. We envisioned a professional organization for professional writers, roughly akin to the AMA for doctors or the Bar Association for attorneys. We didn’t anticipate the immense groundswell of wanna-be romance writers who would flood the organization demanding to be taught and becoming nasty (if not downright violent – I received several physical threats for speaking my opinions) if we published writers wanted to talk among ourselves about things that concerned us. We were, they said, being elitist and deliberately withholding the Magic Secret of Getting Published from them.
For years RWA was nothing more than a teaching organization, a fan organization, an ‘oh-my-we’re-all-real-writers-together-isn’t-it-wonderful’ organization painfully reminiscent of a squealing clique in a high school girls’ bathroom. It sponsored such abominations as official votes for the “Most Romantic” movies and TV shows. (Can you imagine the AMA holding a vote on the “Most Stylish Scrubs” or any such nonsense?) Whatever was proposed, it had to be totally inclusive of all unpublisheds no matter their skill level and so everything quickly dropped and was held to the most elementary level. Advocacy? That was an elitist idea benefiting the publisheds only, and therefore not interesting to the unpublished majority, who at one time outnumbered the publisheds at 9 to 1. ‘Working professionally’ was officially regarded as just the same as being ‘a professional.’ I kept my Charter Membership mainly for sentiment’s sake, but otherwise dropped out. A lot of publisheds dropped out as well, some of them forming NINC, a professional writers’ advocacy organization which is much closer to the original concept of RWA than RWA itself.
Then in recent years I started going to my local chapter meetings again, mainly for the camaraderie, and was pleasantly surprised. There’s still too much emphasis on the unpublished for my tastes, but now publisheds are regarded as more than a mere resource. I doubt if RWA will ever become the organization we originally envisioned, but now it is a great deal more balanced in its approach, with programs and policies useful to published authors as well as unpublished aspirants. As the Desiderata says, ‘everything is happening just as it is supposed to be.’ (A paraphrase – I don’t have a copy of it in front of me.) I think the writing world is richer for RWA being in it, but I cannot help but think how much more it could have been if it were as we originally dreamed.

Tell us a little about your books?
I told you I bore easily, so it’s not surprising that my books are all over the map. In my first writing career (1979-1995) I wrote what was then called romantic suspense, traditional Regencies, historical Gothics, and contemporary mystery romances. I then quit when it became necessary for me to take over not only the physical but the financial care of my mother. When I began writing again in 2005 at the urging of my husband, I found the writing world had changed. Most of the editors with whom I had worked had been promoted to the stratosphere, quit the business or died. New types of books were popular. It was like starting all over again, and that’s not easy.
Since 2005 I’ve sold two traditional Regencies – SECOND CHANCE and THE FAIR AMAZON; a time travel to Ancient Egypt – PASSION’S CHOICE; a contemporary romantic adventure – THE OTHER HALF OF YOUR HEART; two vintage (pre-1968 setting) mystery-adventure-romances – DARK MUSIC and ECHOES IN THE DARK, and – most surprising to me – a children’s book titled DANNY AND THE DUST BUNNIES. (My husband is delighted that my bad housekeeping has finally paid off!) I also did a short story called WEDDING DAY for inclusion in an anthology about grandmothers finding love again.
The book of my heart, however, is a memoir of my mother called THE LAND OF HEART’S DELIGHT. From 1941 to 1944 Mother was a county home demonstration agent in the bleak South Texas ranchland, an area as different from our North Texas home as a foreign country. She even had to learn Spanish to talk to some of the residents.
My father always said that Mother was blessed with the ‘gift of incident’ – she could stand in the middle of an empty room with her arms crossed and still get into more trouble than any two other people. I grew up on the stories of her adventures; she was always going to write a book, but Mother was not a writer and she never got around to it. After her death, though, while going through her papers I found a rough outline and some rudimentary chapters. Well, I knew the stories, so I wrote the book from her viewpoint and put her name on it as author with mine as collaborator. It was my tribute to her.
I’ve written some other books in this time, too – two traditional murder mysteries, a spy story, a tasty horror story about a possessed statue, and a couple of romances. Perhaps when they sell you’ll let me come back to talk about them?

How do you fit in reading, research, online lists, etc?
If you saw my house, you wouldn’t have to ask that question. Luckily my wonderful husband is very easy-going and much more likely to wield the vacuum cleaner than I, though I do love to cook.
I’m afraid reading has sort of fallen by the wayside recently, especially fiction. When I’m truly immersed in a project, I don’t like to read anything in the same general area as that in which I’m working. Now when I read to relax, it’s usually non-fiction; lately it’s been a lot of Egyptology, as we’re scheduled to go back to Luxor for a couple of weeks this winter. When I’m working on my scholarly stuff, I have to relax with something light and fluffy and totally made-up.
Research is a danger, a time-sink, a trap. I love it. I can spend days researching a minor point that probably no one but I would question. It is just so fascinating to me to run little-known facts to earth, to find out how people really lived in another time, to find things that seem unbelievable but are unquestionably true.
Online lists – I’m on way too many, and have developed a bad habit of skipping posts by the handsful, thinking “I’ll catch up later.” I never do, of course.

Do you spend much time marketing? And what do you feel works best for you?
Apparently not enough. Oddly enough, one of my earliest disciplines was marketing, but it is so much easier to do for someone else rather than oneself. I was brought up in a time and a home where to vaunt oneself (“Hey, look at me! Look what I did!”) was considered pushy and vulgar. Even interviews like this make me slightly uncomfortable, and you, dear Anne, are not only kindness itself, but a friend.
Paradoxically, I love doing TV and radio shows – as an old warhorse of a performer, they are second nature – and book signings can be great fun, almost like having a literary salon. It’s only setting up these venues that’s a bore. When I can afford one, I hire a publicist to set things up for me and to my mind that’s ideal. Unfortunately, my writing income doesn’t stretch to one very often.
Of course, I am an old-school dinosaur who believes that everyone should be doing what they do best and what is most practical to achieve the desired outcome – i.e., book sales. Writers should be putting their energies to writing the best books they can. Publishers should be putting out these books, and by that I mean more than just creating paper objects or electronic files; publishers should be doing the lion’s share of the publicity. Publishers have the contacts; to expect the writers to go out – taking time from writing – and find, contact and utilize the publicity venues, each writer on his own individually, is akin to each writer having to reinvent the wheel. Writers should be writing. (Now I don’t want to tar all publishers with the same brush; some – generally the smaller ones more than the big boys – are quite good about doing a fair chunk of the publicity. I’m talking about the industry as a whole.) Having each writer do exactly the same thing on an individual basis (finding publicity venues and using them) when a publisher could do large numbers at the same time is not a logical use of time and resources. End of rant.

For all those aspiring writers out there who are looking for that magic formula - do you have any suggestions for them?
Ah, the Magic Secret of Getting Published. Everyone wants it, but it doesn’t exist – as a secret, that is. In a nutshell, hard work. Write a good book. Learn the rules of grammar, punctuation and spelling, and break them only rarely and then only with very good reason. Rewrite. Edit ruthlessly. Repeat as necessary until your story is so cohesive and polished it shines like a mirror.
It shouldn’t have to be said, but grammar, punctuation and spelling count! They’re important. They are the basis on which we communicate. The quality of so many manuscripts I see today is appalling, as are some of the books actually published. It doesn’t matter how good your story is, if it’s presented in a semi-literate way that’s two strikes against it right there. Communication is language, and for it to be mutually understood there has to be a bedrock of rules. Can you tell I spent a great deal of my life as an editor?

What’s coming up for you in your writing career?
Heaven only knows! Having been told I’m better with dead bodies than live ones, I’ve been doing a couple of straight mysteries, which I will publish under the name of Janis Patterson. (It is my legal married name, it honors my husband and – with any luck at all – will get me shelved next to James Patterson!) It’s a little frightening how much I enjoy killing people. Want to stop a conversation dead in its tracks? When someone asks you what you do, tell them in a sweet, dulcet voice, “I kill people.” Fun! I once did that to a radio talk show host acquaintance of ours while we were on the air – not a book show, by the way – and it took him almost 15 seconds of dead air to get some words back in his mouth. On air, 15 seconds is a lo-o-o-ong time.
Seriously, I am always trying to grow as a writer, to expand my abilities and try new things. I even wrote two erotica books – under a pseudonym that shall never be revealed! – and disliked the experience intensely. I find sex on the page boring, as I’ve never read a sex scene that can match either my imagination or my memories! Besides, I was brought up in a very proper home where we were taught there are some things one does – and while one may do them very well and one may enjoy them thoroughly – but one simply doesn’t talk about them! I’ve wondered if that ‘close the bedroom door, please’ attitude is why I don’t sell better in romance. If it is so, I feel sorry for us as a world of readers. There are some things which lose their magic and their special-ness when exposed in the glaring light of public attention.
A year or two ago a reviewer absolutely sent me over the moon when she called me the logical successor to Phyllis A. Whitney and Virginia Coffman. My feet didn’t touch ground for a week! I love to write and read the old style Gothic romances – lots of atmosphere and romance and mystery and maybe spooky stuff, but all squeaky clean. All things change, and I hope the wheel turns and that kind of book returns to wide-spread fashion. And while I’m still alive, too, if that’s not asking too much, because I have a number of absolutely yummy manuscripts!
To return to practicalities, I am at the moment trying to get an agent, and after 16-18 novels it shouldn’t be this difficult. It seems that agents today are more interested in finding a single quick sale book which they love than in creating a lasting relationship with a writer. I’ve had agents in the past and, unfortunately, the only one I’d really want to have again died. Still, I keep looking because so many of the top publishers refuse to look at any unagented projects, an attitude I find not only self-defeating but idiotic, as it makes the agent’s taste the criteria for what is considered rather than their own.
Excerpt from The Fair Amazon:
Left to his own devices, Sir Trevor Longchamps would just as soon have spent the evening his rooms, perhaps splitting a bottle and a bird with one or two of his old friends. Last night’s dissipations at the Arunelots’ ball had left him more wrung out than he would have thought possible. If he had had any idea that she might have been there, he would much have preferred to call on Diana at her home and spend a quiet evening in her company. Such lack of energy was disconcerting to him, he who used to ride without tiring for hours on end, he who had ridden then marched three days straight in the field as the rain had fallen in an endless curtain. To find that now he should be as weak as a stripling, finding excursions on two straight nights tiring was almost oversetting and definitely maddening.
To encourage the thaw between his mother and his beloved, though, he would endure a thousand theatre evenings. The invitation, personally extended to Diana by his aunt and seconded by his mother, had left him almost speechless and filled with a quiet happiness. The idea of marrying without familial approval was horrible, unacceptable, but he was beginning to see that no matter how acceptable her breeding his adored one was from a different level of society. What annoyed him, though, was that he couldn’t tell how he knew; there was no one incident, no slip that he could point to, it was just something of which he was becoming aware.
“You are most punctual, Trevor,” said Lady Barnstaple, extending her hand for his kiss. “Welcome, Miss Wintersea.”
Her eyes wide in taking in the most beautiful room she had ever seen, Miss Wintersea dropped a curtsey first to Lady Barnstaple and then to Lady Longchamps and hoped that she did not resemble a gaping hayseed.
“Please sit down, Trevor, you loom over me like a tree!” ordered Lady Barnstaple, the merest hint of a smile taking the sting from her words. “No, not you, Miss Wintersea. Please take that chair so that we may see you more easily.” Her ladyship gestured to a dainty gilt chair between the party and the door, placed almost as a witness box before the court.
Trevor’s half-smile twisted. If his Diana were to be accepted into this circle, it was obvious she would have to earn the honor. There was no way around it though, so he sent her an encouraging nod, then gave a wink to his younger sister. Edwina, her face stiff and her eyes large, who was seated behind her mother and Lady Barnstaple. She had not been introduced, as was proper with a girl not yet out.
With the grace of an anointed queen the Incomparable Miss Wintersea seated herself where indicated and calmly faced her inquisitors. It was not her fault that she looked like a child pretending to be an adult, or that the chair had legs so tall her feet swung free above the floor.
“You come from Yorkshire, I believe,” stated Lady Longchamps as if the place itself were suspect.
“Yes,” Miss Wintersea replied with the proper blend of humility and pride. “My family has held Hallam Castle since the days of Good Queen Anne. It was a reward to my ancestor for his service to the Crown under Marlborough.”
“Couldn’t have been very good service if it only got him a castle in Yorkshire,” Lady Barnstaple said not quite sotto voce to Lady Longchamps.
The door opened.
“Dear Godmother, Lady Longchamps, I fear I am dreadfully late…” Georgina’s voice faded.
The older ladies’ planning had been perfect. From Sir Trevor’s viewpoint he could see both young women with ease. The differences between them were blatantly obvious, as was their surprise. It was all the two elder ladies could do to keep from grinning.
The moment she realized what was happening, Miss Wintersea had stood and turned, realizing too late that her lack of inches was in this case a distinct disadvantage. Regrettably, to scramble back into the too-tall chair was too undignified an action to be considered, so she simply stood there as if it were what she really wished to do.
What Diana really wished was to be far away at the moment. Her gown, a airy, highly-trimmed confection of purest white, complimented her dark looks and gave her a nearly exotic aspect. By comparison to the other lady, it also was obvious that it had come from a less than premiere modiste; even worse, the fashionable profusion of lace and floss knots made her look almost as if she had suffered a collision with a bag of feathers.
Startled, Georgina stopped short and unconsciously presented herself in the most flattering aspect. She was clad in a gown so simple it might have been called severe. The underdress of was of the palest gold satin and topped with a gauzy overdress of cream randomly shot with gold threads that winked faintly in the light. Around her neck was a single enormous citrine borrowed from her godmother; smaller citrines flashed in her ears. Her golden hair, let grow long for the convenience of pinning it out of the way, had not been cut; now it was piled into a simple corona like a crown around her head, with only a few careful tendrils allowed to fall about her face. Pale and cool and elegant, she could have been a fairy queen, or even a real queen, if any of them had such exquisite taste.
Trevor sat forward, gasping as if he had been struck. For an uncomfortable moment he saw three women – the smiling, wild half-child Georgina he had left behind to go to war, the gray and drawn hag he had found on his return and this – this goddess! – before they merged in his suddenly fevered brain. This was Georgina? How…?
“My dear, this is Miss Diana Wintersea of Yorkshire, an acquaintance of Trevor’s,” Lady Barnstaple said with a perfect aplomb that did not quite completely mask the mischief bubbling in the back of her eyes. “Miss Wintersea, allow me to present my goddaughter, Miss Georgina Montcalm of High Barrow House.”
Georgina had been trained well. Later she was told she had spoken most properly, extending her hand to Miss Wintersea and greeting Trevor, both with the proper combination of familiarity and restraint. She remembered nothing of it, nor of the dinner that followed.
At least, she thought as her swansdown-trimmed cape of golden velvet was draped about her shoulders, the worst was over. In the theatre all she need do would be watch the play. Nothing untoward could happen there.
Thanks Janis Susan!

Friday, June 05, 2009

Special Guest Blogger: Nancy Famolari!


I have a special guest to my blog this week, author Nancy Famolari!

Please tell me about yourself.
I live on a farm in the Endless Mountains of Pennsylvania with my husband, five horses, two dogs and six white cats. We have four sons, all married, and six grandchildren. Unfortunately we don't see them often since they all live quite far away and the farm keeps us busy.

Our favorite activity is riding our horses. We have three Paso Finos and one Morgan gelding that we use for riding. Paso Finos are gaited horses, very smooth. They came to the Americas with the Spanish conquistadors. We are absolutely in love with this breed of horses. Since we're not young, it's nice to have a smooth ride, and they're exceptionally intelligent. They actually keep us out of trouble on the trail.

What would you say is the most difficult thing about writing?
I'd say the most important thing about writing and the most difficult is rewriting. It's important because when you go over the story not only do you remove errors, but you add depth to your characters. The evolution of your characters is probably the hardest because when you change something you have to make it consistent throughout the rest of the novel.

Is it easy for you to divide your writing time between short and long fiction and different genres? And what make you decide which one you'll write next?
It's not easy for me to divide my writing time. When I'm working on a novel, and that is my preferred mode, I like to stay focused on the story and characters. I have written and published both flash fiction and traditional short stories, but novels are my first love. I think this has something to do with the fact that I don't read short fiction. When I read, it's either novels or book length non-fiction. I write both mainstream romance and mystery novels. I have to admit my favorite is the mystery novel.

What is your process in writing a mystery? Do you write advance plot points, etc?
When I write a mystery, I have a general idea of the plot. For me, the most important part is knowing the ending. Since I know 'who done it,' I can lay out red herrings and make sure that I've covered my tracks on the villain. I write the book the first time through, concentrating on the plot, then I rewrite and flesh out the characters, add more clues and generally clean it up.

What gives you the inspiration to write, where do the ideas come from?
My ideas come from watching people and, of course, gossiping about why certain things happen to people. I live in a small town. Many of my characters and situations are amplifications of things that happen here.

Who are your favourite authors and why?
My favorite authors are mystery writers: Dorothy Sayers and Elizabeth George. I love the intricate plots. I'm also fascinated by English mysteries. I love the setting. I also like the puzzle driven quality rather than police procedurals, or books about violent crimes.

What do you have coming up next?
I just finished editing, Lake House, the second book in my Montbleu Murder series. The first book will be available from Red Rose Publishing in 2009. I'm hopeful they'll like the second book also. Lake House is a little different because it has a strong paranormal element.
Excerpt from Summer's Story:

"If you think I'll stay in your house after you killed my father, Ned Granger, you're crazy." Summer Langston folded her arms across her chest and glared.
"I think that's a bit of an overstatement." Ned shoved his hands into his jeans pockets and rocked back on the heels of his English leather boots.
"Well, I don't. When you told him he couldn't work with the yearlings anymore, it broke his heart. You might as well have shot him."
"I'm sorry, Summer."
For a long moment the house was still, the ticking of the kitchen clock sounded like a blacksmith's hammer striking a metal shoe. Summer couldn't believe things had gone so wrong. The move to Golden Oaks had seemed like the answer to a prayer. A wonderful old house to live in, top ranked yearlings to train, and a chance to try the breeding experiments Sam had always dreamed of doing.
Ned broke the silence. "I know you blame me, but frankly, Sam's drinking was way out of control. I had to do what I thought was right for the farm. I hoped he'd take it as a sign and get some help."
"He could have gotten treatment and stayed on. He loved those horses. They were his whole life." Summer wanted to grab the tall man in front of her, flail her fists at his broad chest until he felt the same pain she did.
"Be fair, Summer. Candyman got colic and nearly died when he got into the grain bin. Sam left the stall door open. I couldn't put any more horses at risk."
"Maybe Sam didn't leave the door open. Maybe Candyman got it open."
"Summer, face facts, your father may have been the best Standardbred trainer I ever worked with, but he was an alcoholic. He was drunk most of the time this fall. You should know. You were running the stable."
Summer stared at the green fields beyond the farmhouse window dotted with prize winning Standardbred horses. Ned worked hard to make his farm one of the best. She didn't want to believe her father had decided to drink himself to death and put the reputation of the farm at risk. Someone else had to be responsible. Ned was responsible. She was responsible. They could have done more. She felt tears welling behind her eyes.
Ned stepped closer. "I didn't ask him to leave. I did make it clear that he couldn't work with the horses until he got into a treatment program." He lifted his arms as though he might try to comfort her. "I thought you knew."
Summer moved so the oak table separated them. She couldn't bear to have Ned touch her. He'd let Sam down; he'd let her down. "You could have tried harder."
"I'm sorry you feel that way, Summer. I did the best I could." Ned reached for the white Stetson he'd tossed on the table.
Outside, an engine roared, a door slammed, and a heavy tromp of boots crossed the wooden porch. The old oak door swung wide and a tall, broad shouldered man with curly, dark brown hair strode into the room. "Thought I might find you here."
Summer fought down the frisson of excitement Davis always generated in her. "Where else would I be? I live here." Sadly she let her eyes drift around the familiar room. "At least I live here for the moment."
"That's good enough." The dark man crossed the floor in two steps and put his arms around her slight figure. "I came as soon as I heard."
Against her better judgment, Summer relaxed into his embrace. It felt good to have someone hold her. "I'm glad you came."
"I know it hurts. I loved the old guy, too."
They stood silently for a moment. Then Davis released her, and said, "So what got your temper up? I could hear you yelling all the way across the yard."
"You couldn't possibly have heard. You just got here."
Davis grinned. "That's better. Well, maybe I only heard you from the porch, but when I see those red cheeks, I know someone's gettin' cussed."
Summer stamped her foot. "I wasn't cussing."
Davis looked at Ned standing stiffly beside the table. "That right?"
"I wouldn't call it cussing exactly."
Summer opened her mouth, but Davis beat her to it. "All right, Irish, just tell me what's going on."
Ned said, "I offered my sympathy and told her she didn't have to rush to move." His brilliant blue gaze rested on Summer. "I'd be happy to help any way I can. I – I'd like to make it up to you in some way."
Davis put a protective arm around her shoulders, but she moved away. "I think Summer's got friends who can take care of her."
"I'm sure she does. Are you planning to have her move in with you?"
"If she wants to."Summer shook off the heavy arm. "I'm not moving in with anyone. I'll find my own place."